For my final portfolio I chose to revise my arguing a position
essay. The strengths of my arguing a position
essay are its overall clarity and how it appeals to the intended audience-
students. The weaknesses of my arguing a position essay are the thesis which could
be more informative and I feel like my paper could be a little longer. To make
effective changes to my essay, I am going to work on focusing the paper so it doesn’t
stray from the main idea. It is going to improve the reading quality, and the
essay is going to flow more easily. I could also focus on the audience, and
instead of focusing mostly on students, I am going to add elements which appeal
to teachers as well. Furthermore, I am going to make substantial corrections to
the thesis of my argument. I am going to make them straight forward, and to the
point. I am aware that it is the quality
and not quantity of my essay that makes it good. Still, I would like to take
care of its appropriate length, perhaps by adding elements from my own experience,
or bring more opposing ideas to the action.
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